Night Mistress

this was very cute and very "young love". i like young love. posted another piece soon.

it's definitly sound interesting, merry. you will have to keep me updated.

pshhxhoney: thanks. i really don't see those things when i re-read over my stuff for some odd reason. i'm glad that you enjoyed my story. i will pm you when ...

Merry_haven: Landon is her father. i changed the name from Aidan. thanks for your feeback.

again, Ash. so much better than before. It's smoother, and more relax then before. it's better. i like how you descrbe each sent. that's so cool. well, i am off ...

wow! such insight to emotions. i like "you" keep say sorry but in different way and add a little something on the end. i really like your andrew. i hope ...

i have edited...again. so readers, new and old, enjoy.

Readers, new and old, I have edit and i sincerely hope that you like it better this way. happy reading.

hey andrew! this sounded really deep. the emtion were raw and untamed and i like that. keep up the good work. oh and chapter five is out.

i have edited again. so readers, new and old, check it out. please.

oh, okay. yeah, that's Ashton for you. he is quiet like jasper in twilight. he opens up when you give to know him. thanks for your feeback. i will make ...

Jas: Avery doesn't go to school with them. he goes to college.

thanks guys.

alright, so Jasperr decide on the change. so, now what? i guess i have to tuned in for the next chapter.

oh. i forgot the Blue Bloods Series by Messlia De La Cruz too.